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Imperfection your perfection by ~iheartpirates:iconiheartpirates:



She's the girl in black you'll never know
Gloomy and gothic
Her skin is white snow
Purple red hair
And big blue eyes
Her smile and kiss
Is a sweet surprise
She'll touch your heart
When she holds your hand
Stand together
In the golden sand
Feel it warm between your toes
Feel the sea breeze on your face
Her kiss on your nose
Then gone without a trace.
Heartbreaker
Soultaker
Lovemaker
Imperfection
False smiles
And agonising pain
Let me help you.
Help you again.
©2005-2009 ~iheartpirates
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for the girl who changed my life
without you id be all alone

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:iconbutterballsxe:
I get the main point of the poem. It's rather interesting really. Some truth; however, I would know them if they went on the computer. But you're right I wouldn't know them if they're offline because I would usually be generalized to have the mindset of a "Goth". So, I would never really take the time to know them?

I don't really get the last two lines. How it has relevance to the poem. Maybe I missed something?
:iconiheartpirates:
lol, its more relevant to me and the girl its about really
people mistreat her so much and i just want to help her because she never deserves it

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:iconbutterballsxe:
Ah. So, it sounds like this is a situation of a prep and a Goth coming together. More of a prep that has good morals with anyone and isn't one of the average stereotyped "Dumb blonde bitches". You saw her to be in disstress so you gave her a helping hand. Nice, but not practical. Not bad though. How I saw it at least.
:iconiheartpirates:
sorta, its not really like that, shes more goth than me, shes just a great friend in need of help really

and im in england so preppy is such a kool word :P

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:iconbeautyinblood:
is it about lara? am i right???? lol
its a cool poem, its very apparent how much u love this person n theyre very lucky to have friend that :heart: them this much

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:blackrose:
:iconiheartpirates:
eee yea its about miss lara :)
shes here rite now!!

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:iconbeautyinblood:
lol bless ya!!! hope ur having/had a gr8 time cam whoring lol!!!

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:blackrose:
:iconiheartpirates:
we sure did!! took about 105 pics lol!!

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